#13
/Following the third variation’s feedback where a professor said that my watercolors didn’t contribute any interpretation of the essay by displaying something I removed them all entirely. Truth be told, I was unsure about my inclusion of these watercolors the whole time. I more used them as placeholders for the images. I was hoping for feedback about them in my second iteration but it was glossed over. I was never confident about them and I knew deep down that they felt out of place so I ended up getting rid of them and am happy with my decision and the next result.